The Monday Withdrawals

The note that Opal had written under my four words said: I do not have a nephew. I held it in my palm like a hot coal, standing in the parking lot behind the bank, on the phone with my ex husband. “Duane,” I said, “the man in that truck is not her family. I think he is holding her.” There was a silence on the line, and then the voice of Duane, flat and quick, the voice he used when he was moving. “Stay inside the bank. Do not follow her. I am calling the state. I am twelve minutes away.”

The state came in force. By noon there were three unmarked cars on Sixth Avenue, and a trooper in a vest was kneeling behind the hedge of Opal, and Duane, who had once been my husband and had never stopped being my friend, was at the door with a search warrant in his hand. They knocked, and nobody answered. Then a window on the second floor opened a crack, and a thin, shaking voice called out, “I am here. I am here. Please do not hurt him, he has a gun.”

It took forty five minutes. A negotiator from the Oklahoma State Bureau of Investigation talked to Cody Pruett through the front door, in a low, steady voice, about his mother, his parole, his options. I stood behind a patrol car with a bank manager who kept apologizing to me and a deputy who kept telling me to stay back. At 1:10, the door opened. A big, pale, sweating man with his hands in the air walked out onto the porch, blinking in the sun. Behind him, in the dark hallway, stood a very small old woman in a blue church coat.

A single teller who looks up from the counter can undo what an entire system chose not to see.

Opal Hendricks sat in my office for the rest of the afternoon, wrapped in a blanket, with a cup of weak coffee in both hands. She told it in pieces. Cody Pruett had come to the feed store in the spring of 2019, selling a tonic for arthritis, and Virgil, who was seventy nine and hurting, had bought three bottles. He had died eleven days later. The coroner called it natural causes. But Cody, who knew what was in those bottles, had kept the receipts. When he got out of prison, he came to her door with a smile and a threat.

“He said if I did not pay him, he would tell the police that I had poisoned my husband,” Opal said. “He said I had been the one to give Virgil the tonic. He had a bottle with my fingerprints on it. I am eighty four years old and I cannot even open a pickle jar without help. But I believed him, because I had always wondered.” Her eyes filled. “For four years I wondered if I had done something wrong. I thought if I paid, the questions would stop.”

I put my hand over hers. The coroner had kept the sample from Virgil, as required, and the state laboratory in Oklahoma City ran the test in two weeks. They found a compound in the tonic that no honest apothecary would sell. It had thinned his blood to the point that a small fall in the stockroom could kill him. Cody had not meant to murder anyone. He had meant to sell snake oil to old men. Virgil had slipped on the loading dock, and Cody had driven away and never looked back.

He pleaded guilty in December to extortion, financial exploitation of an elderly person, and involuntary manslaughter. He was sentenced to twenty two years. The judge said from the bench that he had preyed on the ones with the least power to refuse. Opal sat in the front row in her church coat with Duane on one side and me on the other. When the gavel came down, she folded her hands in her lap and said, quietly, “Virgil, it was not me.” I felt something in my chest give way.

The state recovered seventy one thousand dollars of the hundred and eight thousand nine hundred. It was in a coffee can in the freezer of Cody, wrapped in foil, and in the pocket of a coat in a closet. The rest was gone, spent on poker and a motel room in Texarkana. Opal said she did not care. “I have my house,” she said. “I have my Monday coffee. I have a friend at the bank who looked up when she was told not to.” She patted my cheek with a dry, light hand.

My branch manager apologized to me in front of the staff. The bank changed its policy that spring, and now any teller who sees a pattern of withdrawals, even under the line, is required to speak up, not to be silent. They put a new sign in the break room: See Something, Say Something. The regional vice president flew in from Tulsa to give me a plaque, which I put in a drawer. I do not need a plaque. I know exactly what I did, and I would do it every time.

Opal comes in on Mondays still, at ten, in her blue church coat and the pecan colored lipstick. She withdraws twenty dollars, in a five and fifteen ones, and brings me a slice of pecan pie in a foil wrapped plate. Last week she slid a deposit slip across the counter, and my heart jumped. It had no numbers on it, only six small words in pencil: Thank you for looking up, honey. I laughed until I cried, and the customer behind her laughed too, though she did not know why.

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