The Teche House

The little white house on Bayou Teche stood at the end of a long shell drive shaded by live oaks, with green shutters and a deep front porch where somebody had hung a row of ferns. The door was open, as Andre had said. Mr. Arceneaux and I climbed the three steps together, with the ring of old keys in my hand and my son and daughter in law behind us. A smell of coffee and cornbread came out of the house to meet me. From somewhere inside, I heard a radio playing a zydeco tune, low and sweet.

“Hello?” I called. “Is anyone home?” A woman came out of the kitchen drying her hands on a dish towel. She was about seventy, small and round, with silver hair pinned up in a bun and a flowered apron. She stopped when she saw us. Her eyes went from me to Mr. Arceneaux, and from him to Courtney, and I saw her face go slowly white. “Oh,” she said. “Oh, Lord. Courtney, who are these people?” And my daughter in law, who had worn a crown on her head at her fortieth birthday, took a step backward and put her hand on the porch rail.

The woman was named Odile Broussard. I knew her name before she said it, because Placide had talked about her husband for years. Hyppolite Broussard was a derrickman who worked beside my husband for twelve years on the same platform. When Placide died, he stood in the front row of the funeral, holding his hat. Hyppolite had passed in 2004. Odile, the widow, had been left with a small pension and no place to go. I stood in the doorway and understood, at last, who was living in the house.

We sat at her kitchen table, because she insisted, and she poured coffee into four cups with a hand that shook. Odile told me, in a rush, that three years ago a young woman had come to her door with a paper and said the house was owned by the family of her husband, that they wished to rent it to someone kind, for nine hundred dollars a month. It was a fair price. Odile had been paying it since. She had never missed a month. She had thought Courtney was her landlady. She had never known there was another name on the deed.

A house built with love will wait for years for the right person to walk through the door, and when she does, it will know her.

I turned to my daughter in law. She had not said a word. She sat with her sunglasses in her lap, studying the pattern of the oilcloth, with a face that was no longer proud. Andre spoke for her, in a halting voice. He said the judge had died three years earlier, and that the lawyer had sent a letter to the office of Andre, because Andre was my only son. Courtney had opened it. She had read the will, and the deed, and had seen how much the house was worth. And she had told her husband that his mother would not want to be bothered with it.

“She said you were too old to manage a property,” Andre said. His eyes were red. “She said she would handle it and send you the money. I should have asked. I should have called you. Instead I signed a paper declining the inheritance on your behalf, because she told me you had said you did not want it. I knew better.” He covered his face with his hands. I looked at my son, the boy I had put through college with a broom, a grown man with a gray streak in his hair, and my heart broke in two.

Courtney finally spoke. Her voice was very small. “Dolores, I took thirty two thousand four hundred dollars in rent over three years,” she said. “I spent it on the pool, the party, the catering. I have been so afraid of being poor. I grew up with a mother who counted pennies, and I swore I would never be that person. And then I handed you a bucket.” She put her face down on the table. “I do not know how to say how ashamed I am. It was the cruelest thing I have ever done.”

I did not move for a long time. The radio played on, a waltz now, thin and sweet. Mr. Arceneaux sat quietly with his briefcase on his knee. Odile looked from face to face, wringing the dish towel. Then I picked up the cigar box, the one with the initials P.D. burned in the lid, and opened the folded note in the handwriting of Placide. Dolores, it began. This is where I am going to teach you to fish. Forgive the delay. Love, your husband. I read it aloud, and by the end my voice had cracked.

I looked at Courtney. I said that I was not going to put her out on the street, nor ask for the money back all at once, nor tell the parish what she had done. I said I had mopped floors for thirty one years, and I knew that a floor can be made clean again. Then I said that she would repay every cent, in monthly sums, and that Odile would stay in the house for as long as she lived, rent free, because her husband had once stood beside mine in the wind and the cold.

Odile burst into tears. Courtney, to my surprise, rose and came around the table and knelt on the kitchen floor in her good white linen, and put her arms around my knees. Andre knelt beside her. The three of us stayed that way a long moment, on the faded linoleum, while the radio played and the coffee cooled. Mr. Arceneaux took off his glasses and polished them with great attention. I touched the bent heads of my children, and I said what my mother had always said. “Get up now, cher. We have beans to cook.”

I moved into the back bedroom the following spring, with Odile in the front. We sit on the porch in the evenings, two old widows with a plate of boiled crawfish, watching the herons on the bayou. Andre comes on Saturdays with the grandchildren, and Courtney sends a check every month, and last Easter she brought a cake and offered, shyly, to wash the dishes. I let her. On the wall of the kitchen hangs the hard hat of Placide, polished and bright, on a nail beside a fishing rod. Beneath it, I have written in chalk, This is where I learned.

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